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writing update

I have been very busy. It’s mid term for my graduate class and there’s this research paper due Thursday. But I have also been sneaking in a few fiction writing minutes over the last few weeks. Finally finished another scene for We Fit, the sequel to We Three, an erotic romance, emphasis on the romance.

inspiration cover for We Fit
creative inspiration cover for We Fit, sequel to We Three

Thought I’d share a preview.

Elena and Jess walked out of the bedroom. Collecting her laptop from the living room, Elena returned to the dining table to set out breakfast items and found colorfully wrapped packages and envelopes at her place and where Jess usually sat when they ate together. She frowned, but then, lifting the card, she remembered a conversation with Eric about taking a spring trip. He must’ve been able to swing it, she thought. “Jess, come out here for a sec.”

“What’s up?” Jess appeared at the space between the dining table and kitchen entry. “Presents?”

“Presents,” she confirmed. “You’ve got a card.”

“What for?”

Elena had already opened her envelope with a card. “It says ‘All That Jazz’.” She caught a piece of paper that fell from the card. “Oh. I think–oh!” She quickly pointed to Jess’s package. “Jess, open yours.”

Jess stood behind her chair and reached for the package first. Elena could feel her own excitement building as she anticipated the blonde’s reaction to Eric’s gift. Out of the clown-wrapped paper, Jess removed a green and gray sweatshirt.

“When am I going to be able to wear a sweatshirt in Miami?” Jess asked. She turned it around holding the sweatshirt with a big Shamrock between the words “Not Irish, Just Drunk.”

“The card,” Elena said, finally unable to hide her impatient excitement. “Read his card.”

Jess lifted the flap out of the unsealed envelope and removed the card. “All That Jazz,” she read aloud then flipped open the front cover. Elena held her breath. “A plane ticket?”

Elena held up her own. “To Chicago!”

“What’s in Chicago?”

“Eric started as a commercial pilot out of O’Hare. He likes to go back every so often.”

Jess read the ticket information. “March 16. 18. That’s three days?”

“Over St Patrick’s Day,” Elena explained pointing at Jess’s sweatshirt then her own, now unpacked, the gold letters splashed over a green shamrock read: Too cute to pinch. “Eric and I have gone a few times. Now you’ll get to experience it, too. They dye the river green and everything is just…” She stumbled to explain. “You’ll love it,” she finished.

Jess slowly smiled and lifted her gaze from the ticket, meeting Elena’s.. Her green eyes filled with bright sparkles. “I’ve …wow. They put dye in the river? How? I’ve never…This is….he got me a ticket.” She sank to the chair still holding the ticket and shirt.

Yep, I decided the trio needed to take a vacation. Must be all this stuck inside I’m feeling from the pandemic.

~ Lara

peek at progress

Yesterday I gave myself an agenda for the week. So far I have mown the lawn, completed an assignment for my grad class, and wrote a little on one of my stories. Here’s a sneak peek at the story in progress…

inspiration cover for We Fit
creative inspiration cover for We Fit, sequel to We Three

This is from We Fit, my FFM sequel to We Three. There’s some explicit but brief descriptions of sexual activity as Eric reflects on earlier in the evening.

The primary moment, however, is Eric seeing Jess for the first time they haven’t seen each other in a while.

Eric bussed Elena’s cheek before he replaced his suit jacket from the club room lockers. After a quick look inside the dark recessed space for anything they’d forgotten, he asked, “Got everything?” He looked again at her smiling where she sat on the bench after replacing her heels.

“Yep,” Elena replied. She removed the locker key on its stretchy ring from around her wrist and handed it to him before she picked up her clutch from seat beside her.

He replaced the key in the locker and held out his hand for her to take.

“You leaving?”

Eric turned to see Hector standing at the corner of the bank of lockers. “Yeah, time to get home,” he replied to the club owner.

“Maya and I are taking Giana and Rohan to our suite and continue the fun. You should join us.”

Elena lightly squeezed his hand as she took it; when he saw her face, he saw the unspoken ‘no’ in her eyes. He shook his head at Hector. “Thanks, but we’re all played out… for tonight anyway,” he added, to soften the blow he saw land in Hector’s eyes as a shadow. “We’re going home.”

“My door is always open,” Hector replied. “Elena, it was wonderful to see you again.”

Elena nodded at him. “Good to see you, too, Hector.” She took Eric’s hand and quickly started to leave. So he didn’t look dragged, Eric moved quickly as well.

“Everything okay?” he asked when they were alone walking down the corridor from the playrooms back toward the front of the club.

“Yes, I’m fine.” She smiled. “I’m going to use the restroom.”

“I thought we were going home?”

“I may have a surprise for you,” she replied. “Just wait here a minute.”

Elena disappeared into the small restroom. Eric leaned on the wall outside and looked around. The place felt empty. The bar had been closed a couple hours ago and its lights were dim. He didn’t even hear the clatter of staff cleaning up.

He thought about the times they’d waited here to take Jess home with them. But after Elena had returned from spending Jess’s break with her, she hadn’t said anything, just joined in, riding him after Val had just sucked him hard. She’d been wet and hot, and tight. She had also been smiling so he guessed her reunion with Jess had gone well.


He turned toward the voice at the same time he registered Elena emerging from the restroom behind him. Jess had appeared on the other side of the wall where he was leaning. She wore a simple button up peach blouse and jeans. The tumble of her blonde hair was down from the ponytail or bun she usually wore when working. It brightened the dark corridor as if giving off its own light.

Yeah, I think he’s just a little bit smitten.

~ Lara

We Fit progress

inspiration cover for We Fit

The last couple days, while I haven’t been blogging, I have been writing. I’ve added another 10,000 words to We Fit, the sequel to We Three, now over 50k. The scenes have all been intimacy, everything from kissing to sex.

In a bid to show how deep the love has become between the characters, I’ve strived to make the intimacy more romantic than carnal. While the sex continues to be explicit, the acts are described with more romantic tones. There are also more pauses in the sexual activity, not because the trio are tired, but because each is savoring the physical connections on a emotional level they find wonderous and new.

The pauses also give me a chance to switch point of view between the characters. In We Three, each sexual encounter stays in one character’s point of view for the entire session. In this way I controlled the slow build of the realization that each was in love with the other. In We Fit, I’m taking brief sexual “intermissions” and giving each character the opportunity to have the same encounter from their point of view, to display how much different and deeper they feel than previous sex. It allows them to show their feelings to their partner (and the reader) in a way that makes the sex even more communicative of love.

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In a nutshell, the sex has become more “making love” than “having sex.” If I can carry off that distinction, I feel I will have succeeded in conveying the main message of We Fit.

Here’s an example of what I’m doing. This first scene, from We Three, is oral sex between Elena and Jess. (it’s Elena’s POV, if you can’t tell)

Elena’s moans vibrated against Jess’s clit. Jess was pushed over another edge, and Elena felt the dam slip when it was coated in Jess’s fluids. She pressed it more firmly against the woman’s heated flesh with her fingers and continued licking Jess through another writhing peak, and then another. Finally, Jess’s fingers were nudging, not clutching, and Elena let up. She rested her chin on the top of Jess’s mound, meeting glazed green eyes.

The second scene from We Fit is also oral sex between the two. Can you feel how Elena love is deeper?

With her lips she blazed a moist trail of kisses down Jess’s chest and belly until her nose and tongue burrowed between Jess’s labia and delved into her pussy. The blonde’s jolted “Oh! Mmm,” fluttered into the quiet of the room.

The subtle flavors of the blonde’s fluids soon coated Elena’s chin and cheeks as she elicited more sounds from the blonde’s throat. Moans and bucking hips became “God!” and breathy demands of “Fuck me. Please.”

Elena kissed Jess’s inner thighs, then shifted her attentions from tongue only, to tongue and fingers, curling two then three inside the woman’s pussy and eagerly pressing toward and finding her G spot. New moisture filled Jess’s channel as she came with a gasp and cried out Elena’s name. Elena’s fingers became coated and the liquid dripped into her palm.

She licked and sucked Jess’s labia and clit as the blonde came down from her orgasm.

One arm on Elena’s back and the other flung across her eyes, Jess moaned, “My legs are jelly.”

It was easy to agree because Elena felt her body shaking. She grinned proudly. “You asked, I delivered.”

Bit of a difference, huh? Share your thoughts in the comments.

~ Lara